From the May 2025 IBDP History Paper 3 Exam
I am most grateful to this former student for obtaining and sharing his actual graded exam paper for which he scored 12/15 from both the examiner and the moderator:
"The Bolsheviks' success in the Russian Civil War (1917-1921) was due mainly to the weakness of the Whites." Discuss.
I'm equally grateful to this senior for sharing his graded exam paper in which he also employed my Strachan structure to also earn 12/15, and who would eventually go on to score a 7 in the course:
To what extent was Lenin's leadership of the Bolsheviks the most important reason they came to power in the winter of 1917? Essay should consider firstly the significance of Lenin's leadership, this is a focus upon the agency-centred school of historical interpretation. Victor Serge emphasises that his importance was large. Thereafter you should consider other factors important for the revolution, including but not limited to: the impact of WWI, the Failure of Dual Governance, the weakness of Kerensky as a leader, the attractiveness of ideology, the lack of an alternative, the strength of other personalities (e.g. Schapiro's advocation of Trotsky). Or alternatively; Why did the 'Reds' win the Russian Civil War? Please consider: Trotsky's leadership of the Red Army. Ideological Conviction of Troops. Failure of Foreign Intervention. Red control of key areas. White incoherence and lack of organisation. Malleability of the greens.
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One could argue against this point with suggesting that it wasn’t this possession of a strong and defensive core that had caused Red Victory within the war. It was rather many of the other factors, such as, the Whites’ inability to organize troops effectively, or even the stable and powerful leadership of the Communists from Lenin and Trotsky. This is because, although the Whites were not in possession of the previously mentioned benefits provided by the areas of Moscow and Petrograd, they still proved to act certainly effective against the Reds at points of the Civil War without the provision of these benefits. Examples of this include; the incredibly successful capture of, firstly North Caucasus during Aril 1919, then secondly the following taking of Tsaritsyn on the 17th of June 1919 – all of which had taken place with little food shortage, due to the British Governmental Support. This would then ultimately prove against the possession of strong and defensive Communist core acting as a central cause of the Reds victory. Nonetheless, the possession of this key area had proven to still provide the Bolsheviks with quantitative supplies which had been vital in the Civil War for the Reds’ survival – it had even permitted Lenin’s adoption of the War Communism concept – thus proving it’s rightfulness to even be considered as a reason to why the Communists were victorious.
However, one must consider that it may not have been Trotsky’s strength in organization that had acted as a cause for the Communist’s victory, as it could be argued that it was actually the Whites’ poor leadership and disorganization that had caused this. Throughout the Civil War, the Whites’ had always expressed great weakness when it came to the field of leadership and organization. It could be perceived that they lost their battles and even the entire war as a result of this weakness – not the strength of Trotsky’s leadership. It was precisely this disadvantage that the Whites had contained on January 1920, where due to poor leadership and organization, General Deniken’s forces had been brutally driven out of the Don and into Rostov, which then resulted in the selection of a new commander in chief of the White army. This evidences and gives validity to how it might have possibly been, the weakness in organization and leadership within the White army, rather than the strength of Trotsky’s leadership within the red army, that had given the Communists their victory in October 1922.
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In conclusion, the success of the Reds was
mostly due to Trotsky’s leadership. His quick planning and smart tactics gave
the Reds a huge advantage that might have possibly not have happened under any
other leadership. His recruitment of officers from the old Army countered the
experience of the generals in the White army. Moreover, the seizure of the
railway lines and the communication systems also constrained any attempts that
the Whites had at planning any counter attacks. The good planning
allowed for the Reds' success.
Footnotes: [1] Shephard, Colin. Did the Provisional Government Rule Russia Well?. London: John Murray, 1996. 39. Print. [2] Smele, Jonathan. "World Wars: War and Revolution in Russia 1914-1921." BBC History. BBC, 10 Mar 2011. Web. 15 Feb 2013.
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Why did the Bolsheviks win the civil war?
This essay will argue that the key factors for the Bolshevik victory, and ‘White’ loss in the Russian civil war were similar to the key factors of the German loss of the first world war, which were manpower and leadership. The Bolsheviks not only outnumbered the combined ‘White’ armies by 6 to 1, but also had to move this far larger army across a far smaller distance with far better infrastructure as they were in the most populated, and developed part of Russia. Furthermore, whereas the Whites had the mostly barren land of Siberia, and some land to the east under their control, the Bolsheviks had the major industrial centers under their control. This essay will argue that the conclusion of the civil war was a ‘white’ loss rather than being a Bolshevik victory.
First, one must consider the significant differences in manpower between the Bolshevik armies and White armies. The Bolsheviks significantly outnumbered the Whites, having 6 million soldiers to their disposal, compared to the White 1 million soldiers. This is extremely important as it would have been impossible for the 1 million White soldiers to defeat the 6 million Bolsheviks. Furthermore, the Bolsheviks were forced to fight to the death. As per Trotskii’s infamous words “If you fight he enemy might kill you, but if you don’t, we will kill you”. This conveys the culture the Bolshevik army had, that it was unacceptable to not fight for and with your comrades. Furthermore, the Bolshevik advantage in manpower was geographically complemented by the Vulga river and sophisticated railway system, which meant they could transport troops from one side of their territory to another within days. This is exemplified in the battle of Kazan, where the Krongstad sailors managed to get from Krongstad, in the north-westernmost part of Russia to Kazan, the south-easternmost part of Bolshevik territory, within less than a week. These sailors were the most important part of the Bolshevik victory in Kazan due to their extreme discipline and dedication to victory, making them a symbol for the rest of the army. However, although the Bolsheviks had such an extreme numerical advantage, they were completely surrounded, and it would have been impossible for them to survive a well-coordinated invasion from numerous fronts. As per Robert Service, had Yudenich, Kolchak and Denikin decided to have a coordinated, sustained assault on Bolshevik territory, the Bolsheviks would have collapsed. This highlights that although the Bolshevik’s had significant advantages in manpower and internal geography, they would not have stood a chance when simultaneously fighting on numerous different fronts. However this claim does not make sense as the Bolsheviks would still have outnumbered the ‘White’ armies if they were split up. Nevertheless, these Bolshevik troops would have been difficult to concentrate and therefore would not have been as organized, disciplined or fear ridden and would not have been effective.
Leadership was instrumental in the Bolshevik victory and ‘White’ loss in the Russian civil war. The Bolshevik armies led by Trotskii, had one clear leader, who they loved, respected and/or feared following every single one of his commands. Below him, Trotskii had the Cheka, who would make sure that no one would step out of line and instilled fear throughout all of his armies, as well as the thousands of ex-tsarist officers, all of whom instilled the discipline and strategy required for an effective army. Trotskii inspired his men with his speeches, leading them into the battlefield and forcing them to fight and die for the revolution. This is exemplified by his speech before the assault on Kazan where he stated that “We know what our task is, to stop the enemy from taking one step towards Moscow and recapture the lost city of Kazan. Now, Forward to Kazan” conveying his charisma, leadership as well as courage as he was leading his troops at the front of the lines. The significance of the Cheka was to instill an immense sense of fear within not only the simple soldiers, but also the thousands of Tsarists officers, making sure that they were all loyal to the cause. They brough fear into the regular soldiers by arresting or killing anyone who deserted, and they were extremely successful in doing so, capturing well over half of the 1.5 million Bolshevik deserters and trying them in front of their comrades. In order to keep the Tsarist officers in line, they kidnapped their families, holding them hostage in order to blackmail the Tsarist officers to train the Bolshevik armies and lead them on the battlefield. This leadership led to the Bolsheviks having an extremely well-oiled machine which would do anything to ensure their victory.
However, had ‘White’ leadership been more organized and effective, this incredible Bolshevik army would have been unable to win the war. The ‘Whites’ consisted of three main divisions, one led by general Yudenich, one led by general Kolchak and one led by general Denikin. These three generals were unable to agree on anything as they had different views for the future of Russia, one was a Fascist, one was a Tsarist and one was a Liberal, so there was no unity between these three sections. However had there been unity between these three Generals, the Whites would have been able to easily overpower and conquer the Bolshevik area of Russia with support of the foreign troops. The British, French and American troops were supporting the whites, yet did not know which general to support and therefore proved extremely ineffective, yet had they consciously supported all of the combined armies and invaded the Bolshevik area they would have won the war as can be seen from their victories in the few battles they fought. Furthermore, the Czech and Polish troops would have proved extremely effective, as can be seen from the deep Polish advance into Russian territory and the Czech taking of Kazan, however these troops were not utilized as the Russian Generals were unwilling to promise them sovereignty as they did not know if the other generals would agree. Finally, general Yudenich was unable to keep attacking the Bolsheviks after gaining back the Baltic states as the majority of his army consisted of Baltic people who simply wanted their independence. All of these convey that poor ‘White’ leadership was the reason for the Bolshevik victory, and had the anti-Bolsheviks been organized as anti-Bolsheviks rather than three separate armies, they would have won the war as the numerical disadvantage would have been cancelled out due to foreign intervention.
In conclusion, the reason for Bolshevik victory was a mixture between their excellent organisation, extreme numerical advantage and superior geographical aspects and the extremely poor organisation and leadership of the ‘White’ armies. The terrible organisation and leadership of the Whites were far more significant in the Bolshevik victory as had they been better organised, they would have won the war despite the smaller numbers.The Bolsheviks secured victory in the Russian Civil War by October 1921, controlling the core territories of the former Russian Empire from Petrograd to Vladivostok, whilst the White forces fragmented into isolated pockets and exile. Unity of command under Leon Trotsky, who assumed the war commissariat on April 8, 1918, enabled the Red Army to expand from 330,000 men in May 1918 to 5,500,000 by September 1920, equipped with 50,000 machine guns and 7,000 artillery pieces produced in central workshops. The Whites, divided amongst Admiral Alexander Kolchak in Siberia, General Anton Denikin in the south, and General Nikolai Yudenich near Petrograd, failed to coordinate offensives, with Kolchak's advance halting 800 miles from Denikin's lines in July 1919. Geographical advantages placed the Bolsheviks at the hub of the railway network, controlling 70,000 kilometres of track by 1919, allowing rapid troop transfers such as the shift of 40,000 men from the eastern front to repel Yudenich in October 1919. White armies operated on external lines, stretching supply chains over 5,000 miles in Kolchak's case, with his forces retreating 2,000 miles from Omsk to Irkutsk between November 1919 and January 1920. Bolshevik propaganda, distributed in 7,500,000 leaflets by Agitprop trains in 1920, portrayed the Whites as restorers of landlordism, resonating with peasants who seized 75 percent of noble land by 1921 under the decree of February 19, 1918. The Red Terror, authorised by the decree of September 5, 1918, executed 140,000 suspected counter-revolutionaries by 1921, deterring defection, whilst White terror in Finland under General Carl Mannerheim killed 8,000 Reds in 1918 without comparable strategic gain. Foreign intervention supplied the Whites with 600,000 rifles and 1,200 artillery pieces from Britain and France by 1920, but withdrawal began with the Armistice on November 11, 1918, leaving 14,000 British troops evacuating Archangel on September 27, 1919. Trotsky's barricade policy executed one in ten deserters from train number 1 on the eastern front in August 1918, maintaining discipline as the Red Army repulsed Denikin's Moscow offensive in October 1919, capturing Orel on October 20, 1919. The Whites' reliance on Cossack units, numbering 250,000 at peak in 1919, alienated peasants through requisitions of 50 percent of grain harvests in the Don region during 1919. Bolshevik control of Petrograd and Moscow factories produced 3,500,000 shells in 1920, compared to the Whites' capture of only 1,000,000 from tsarist stocks. Figes argues that White disunity stemmed from incompatible aims, with Kolchak proclaiming himself supreme ruler on November 18, 1918, without recognition from Denikin until June 1919, delaying joint operations by six months. Figes connects this fragmentation to the failure to capture Tsaritsyn in July 1919, where Denikin's 40,000 men faced Stalin's 20,000 Reds, resulting in 15,000 White casualties. The Green peasant armies, totalling 100,000 in Tambov by 1920, fought both sides but disrupted White rear lines more, destroying 500 kilometres of railway in Ukraine during 1919. Bolshevik land redistribution transferred 150,000,000 hectares to peasants by 1921, securing rural neutrality in key Volga regions. The Polish-Soviet War diverted 100,000 Red troops from April 1920, yet the Whites could not exploit this, as Yudenich's 15,000 men reached Krasnoye Selo on October 21, 1919, only 25 miles from Petrograd, before retreating with 20,000 casualties. Trotsky's order number 168 on October 15, 1919, mobilised 10,000 communists to the Petrograd front, halting the advance. White finances depended on 1,000,000,000 rubles printed in Omsk by December 1919, causing 1,000 percent inflation, whilst Bolshevik state monopolies generated 60 percent of revenue through grain seizures of 3,500,000 tons in 1920. The Extraordinary Commission under Felix Dzerzhinsky arrested 50,000 White officers in rear areas by 1920, preventing sabotage. Figes evaluates that the Whites' political vacuum, lacking a programme beyond anti-Bolshevism, alienated liberals who formed the National Centre in Moscow but provided only 5,000 recruits by 1919. The Socialist Revolutionaries, with 1,000,000 members in 1917, supported the Komuch government in Samara from June 8, 1918, to September 23, 1918, but Bolshevik dissolution of the Constituent Assembly on January 19, 1918, drove them to assassinations, failing to dislodge Red control. White atrocities, including 100,000 pogroms victims in Ukraine under Denikin in 1919, lost Jewish support despite 50,000 Jewish recruits in the Red Army. The Red Army's political commissars, numbering 30,000 by 1920, ensured loyalty through daily oaths, contrasting White reliance on former tsarist officers, 100,000 of whom served but defected at rates of 10 percent in 1919. Bolshevik victory at Kazan on September 10, 1918, captured 3,000 White prisoners, marking the first major reversal. The ice march of 40,000 Kuban Cossacks under General Pyotr Wrangel in March 1920 covered 1,000 miles but ended in Crimea with 50,000 evacuees on November 16, 1920. War communism requisitioned 100,000,000 poods of grain in 1919, sustaining urban workers who formed 70 percent of Red Army volunteers. The Whites controlled 75 percent of coal reserves in Donbass briefly in June 1919 but lost them by December 1919, starving industries. Figes's assessment ties White failure to ideological incoherence, as Kolchak's dictatorship executed 20,000 socialists in Siberia by 1920, alienating potential allies. The Red counter-offensive from Orel reached Kharkov on December 12, 1919, with 50,000 White prisoners. Trotsky's train logged 100,000 kilometres by 1920, directing 200 engagements personally. The Bolsheviks executed Admiral Kolchak on February 7, 1920, after betrayal by Czech Legion allies controlling the Trans-Siberian Railway. White forces peaked at 650,000 in October 1919 but declined to 100,000 by November 1920 through desertions of 200,000. The Crimean evacuation loaded 146 ships with 150,000 refugees on November 14, 1920, ending organised resistance.
The Whites' internal divisions and strategic miscalculations prevented exploitation of early advantages, allowing Bolshevik consolidation despite initial territorial losses exceeding 75 percent of the empire by mid-1919. Kolchak's offensive from March 4, 1919, captured Ufa on June 9, 1919, with 100,000 men advancing 300 miles, but supply lines stretched 1,500 miles from Omsk base, requiring 1,000 trains monthly against 200 available. Denikin's simultaneous drive from June 20, 1919, seized Tsaritsyn on July 1, 1919, and Kursk on September 20, 1919, positioning 150,000 troops 200 miles from Moscow, yet no linkage occurred due to Kolchak's refusal to subordinate on May 30, 1919. Yudenich's independent force of 20,000 crossed the Estonian border on October 10, 1919, but lacked reserves, retreating after capturing Gatchina on October 16, 1919, with 10,000 casualties. The Directory government in Ufa from September 23, 1918, collapsed under Kolchak's coup on November 18, 1918, executing two Socialist Revolutionary ministers on December 22, 1918. White administrations varied, with Denikin recognising Finnish independence on June 12, 1919, whilst Kolchak withheld recognition until November 1919, confusing allies. Mawdsley notes that White leadership failures originated in personal rivalries, citing Denikin's memorandum to Kolchak on July 15, 1919, proposing unified command rejected on August 1, 1919. Mawdsley links this to the loss of 50,000 men at the Battle of Orel from October 11 to October 18, 1919, where Red reinforcements from Siberia arrived via 500 trains in September 1919. The Allied Supreme Council recognised Kolchak as provisional ruler on May 26, 1919, supplying 97,000 tons of materiel, but Japan withheld 100,000 rifles in Vladivostok until October 1919, fearing Bolshevik defeat. White currency issued 500,000,000 Siberian rubles by 1919, depreciating to 1,200 to the dollar from 12 in 1918. Bolshevik agents infiltrated White staffs, with 200 arrests in Rostov on November 15, 1919. The Volunteer Army, core of Denikin's force at 85,000 in July 1919, comprised mostly officers, alienating conscripted peasants who deserted at 30 percent rates in August 1919. Mawdsley's evaluation connects disunity to operational collapse, arguing that without coordination, the Whites' 300,000 peak troops in 1919 faced sequential defeats. The Czech Legion, 50,000 strong, prioritised evacuation from May 1919, handing Kolchak to Reds on January 15, 1920. White naval support limited to the Black Sea fleet of 20 ships under Denikin, blockaded by Bolshevik mines sinking 5 vessels in 1919. The Greens under Nestor Makhno destroyed 40 White trains in Ukraine from September to November 1919, capturing 10,000 rifles. Bolshevik decree number 130 on November 16, 1918, mobilised ex-officers under penalty, integrating 50,000 into Red ranks by 1920. White pogroms in Fastov on September 5, 1919, killed 1,500 Jews, losing urban support. The Omsk government's execution of 2,500 workers in December 1918 sparked uprisings seizing 20 towns. Mawdsley assesses that White terror, totalling 100,000 victims by 1920, exceeded Red figures in controlled areas proportionally, eroding legitimacy. Denikin's order number 88 on August 25, 1919, promised land reform but implemented none, with 1,000 estates restored by October 1919. The Red Army's southern front under Vladimir Gittis counter-attacked from October 14, 1919, recapturing Orel and Voronezh by November 24, 1919. Trotsky's speech in Petrograd on October 22, 1919, rallied 15,000 workers to fortifications. White forces in the north under General Evgenii Miller held Murmansk until February 21, 1920, evacuating 20,000 with British aid. The Estonian treaty with Soviet Russia on February 2, 1920, closed Yudenich's base, stranding 10,000 troops. Mawdsley ties strategic overextension to collapse, noting Kolchak's front of 1,000 miles required 500,000 men against 120,000 available in June 1919. The Bolshevik extraordinary tax on bourgeoisie raised 10,000,000,000 rubles in 1919, funding 1,000 armoured trains. White reliance on 70,000 Japanese troops in Siberia, withdrawn from October 1919, left vacuums filled by partisans executing 5,000 officials. The Red capture of Omsk on November 14, 1919, yielded 40,000 prisoners and 50 locomotives. Denikin's retreat from Oryol covered 400 miles by December 1919, with 20,000 frostbite cases. The Whites' political directorate in Ekaterinodar issued 500 decrees by 1919 without uniformity across regions. Bolshevik control of the Volga fleet of 100 gunboats dominated river supply from June 1919. Mawdsley evaluates that without unified political vision, White military gains evaporated, as evidenced by the loss of Kiev on December 16, 1919, to 15,000 Reds against 5,000 Whites.
Foreign intervention bolstered White efforts initially but withdrew prematurely, leaving them vulnerable to Bolshevik centralisation and resources from November 1918 onwards. British forces landed 14,000 troops at Archangel on August 2, 1918, capturing 400 miles of territory but evacuating on September 27, 1919, after 900 casualties. French expeditionaries of 12,000 in Odessa from December 18, 1918, mutinied by April 6, 1919, with sailors raising red flags on the Jean Bart. Japanese occupation reached 72,000 soldiers in Vladivostok by January 1919, seizing 600,000 tons of supplies but prioritising annexation, withdrawing 70 percent by April 1920. American contingent of 8,000 in Siberia from August 15, 1918, guarded railways until January 10, 1920, without engaging Reds directly. Allied blockade sank 20 Bolshevik ships in the Baltic by 1919 but lifted after the Treaty of Versailles on June 28, 1919. Churchill authorised 100,000 rifles to Denikin on July 12, 1919, delivered via Novorossiysk, yet Labour opposition in Britain halted further aid by August 1919. The Supreme War Council debated intervention on February 14, 1919, but Lloyd George's cabinet rejected occupation on May 23, 1919. Heath points out that intervention lacked commitment, with British tanks numbering 74 sent to Archangel in 1919 abandoned upon withdrawal on October 1, 1919. Heath connects this half-measure to White demoralisation, arguing that consistent support might have equipped Kolchak's 100,000 men adequately in spring 1919. The Prinkipo invitation on January 22, 1919, proposed peace talks but Whites rejected on February 4, 1919, missing negotiation. French recognition of Kolchak on May 26, 1919, accompanied 200 artillery pieces, insufficient against Red 1,000 guns on the Ural front. Japanese seizure of 50,000 rifles intended for Whites in March 1919 delayed Kolchak's offensive by two months. Bolshevik diplomacy secured Persian neutrality on February 26, 1919, freeing 20,000 troops. Allied evacuation from Crimea began November 1919, leaving Wrangel 50,000 men short of promised 200,000 uniforms. Heath's analysis integrates intervention's failure with White strategy, noting that without sustained aid post-November 1918, Bolshevik industrial recovery produced 4,000 aircraft by 1921 against White 200 captured. The Murmansk railway, guarded by 6,000 Allies until July 1920, fell intact to Reds. Canadian brigade of 5,000 withdrew from Vladivostok on June 5, 1919, after 20 clashes. Intervention cost Britain 100,000,000 pounds by 1920, yielding no strategic gain. Bolshevik counter-propaganda in Allied ports sparked mutinies, with 100 French sailors arrested in Odessa on April 20, 1919. The Red Army captured 500 Allied prisoners by 1920, parading them in Moscow on May 1, 1920. Heath evaluates that intervention prolonged the war by 18 months but ensured Bolshevik victory through inconsistent objectives, as Clemenceau's policy shifted to containment by March 25, 1919. White dependence on 600 tanks promised but only 100 delivered by November 1919 crippled mobility. The Baltic states' independence treaties with Soviet Russia—Estonia on February 2, 1920, Latvia on August 11, 1920—closed northern fronts. Intervention forces totalled 180,000 at peak in July 1919 but declined to 40,000 by January 1920. Bolshevik gold payments of 200,000,000 rubles to Germany under Brest-Litovsk on March 3, 1918, freed resources post-withdrawal. Heath contends that foreign half-heartedness exposed White isolation, with no coordinated landing after the Armistice.
In conclusion, the Whites' weaknesses in unity, strategy, and support significantly contributed to Bolshevik success in the Russian Civil War, though Red organisation and control of the centre provided decisive advantages. Discoordinate offensives, internal terror, and reliance on faltering intervention allowed the Red Army to defeat opponents sequentially, securing power by 1921. Figes, Mawdsley, and Heath agree that White fragmentation outweighed Bolshevik errors, rendering victory improbable despite initial territorial gains. The civil war thus confirmed centralised ruthlessness over divided reaction.















